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Comments for 'After the Fall - Prologue'



saturn
4:36 am | December 16, 2002
dumb is an opinion. caompred to me, no one is dumb.
Metal Gear Miltie
7:39 pm | December 14, 2002
Gasmask is not dumb.
cool silverthorn
2:37 pm | December 13, 2002
Yeah gasmask how could you be so dumb as to think that.
Glenny
6:40 am | December 13, 2002
Ok...I'll write the series.
And Gasmask, I wasn't intending on making it like a textbook. I was just sort of going over it just to see if people thought it was a good story to continue on.
Gasmask
1:36 am | December 13, 2002
Fair. Grammar could have been worked on, but other that that, pretty good. Oh, try not to make the series read like a history textbook.
Tdaddy
6:06 pm | December 12, 2002
good keep writing


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