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Comments for 'Buried Treasure(7)'



Taze
12:59 am | September 8, 2003
why u stoped writing this series? keep writing it its good.
Ishkabibbl
4:06 am | August 20, 2003
except one*
Ishkabibbl
4:05 am | August 20, 2003
Ugh...now I have to say I hate all love stories from one...damn you to hell with your good stories!
'Nosolee
7:26 pm | August 19, 2003
Great,, 10/10. Only one tincey, incey, little thing(it's not really a "problem"). It's just that Grunts breathe methane, not oxygen. They wear methane maskes. Very trivial.
Formepheus
6:03 pm | August 19, 2003
10/10 good and funny.
Frensa Geran
5:33 pm | August 19, 2003
GAH! I could've sworn I wrote: "Buried Treasure(8)."Oh, they had alot of time to get to know eachother. Most movies/stories don't put in every piece of dialouge.
turbus
3:36 pm | August 19, 2003
Honestly, not as good as the first few. by about 0.0000000000009%. Reason being, i thought chief was gonne kick some more ass than that. What held ya up? 9.9/10
turbus
3:36 pm | August 19, 2003
Honestly, not as good as the first few. by about 0.0000000000009%. Reason being, i thought chief was gonne kick some more ass than that. What held ya up? 9.9/10
Da Mann
2:58 pm | August 19, 2003
So a love story. Hmm. It was good, the only inconsistency was how Marla and John knew each others' names without introducing each other.
Jamirus99
2:36 pm | August 19, 2003
Bout damn time.

Excellent, with a few twists I didn't expect. Hopefully the next part will be out within a week?
Wiley
2:33 pm | August 19, 2003
Wasn't there already a 7th chapter?
10/10. No complaints.


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