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Comments for 'Halo 2, an Elites version, Part III'



Gold Relick Hunter - Elite God
2:04 pm | September 14, 2003
Really awsome, some spelling mistakes though, but other than that its great, a 9/10. If your making another one you should end it with the main Elite and MC duken it out, that would be a good ending scene.
Alpha Lance
7:08 pm | August 9, 2003
That was sweet amigo!9.5/10
scope
1:55 am | August 8, 2003
9/10 I love it. You spelled a few things wrong like ghost, but thats all.
FOrunnER
9:12 pm | August 7, 2003
Thanks. I like your series, On a Pale Horse, it's really good.
FOrunnER
9:12 pm | August 7, 2003
Thanks. I like your series, On a Pale Horse, it's really good.
Silent Hunter
9:07 pm | August 7, 2003
9/10, Only problem is that you dont indent your paragraphs, other then that, Great story


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