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Comments for 'Silver Blooded: Prologue' |
Elite Zov
6:16 pm | July 11, 2004
!@#$ If you know who is Ares and who is Jack, then you'll understand why Jack called his ship Ares the Arsenal. If you still don't, read atleast three part chapter Belive and Reconsider. And sorry, I kinda flew on you. :)
And HoZ, thanx. No wonder why there no ppl like you. Ppl get the hell away form here ass possible with that kind of ppl like here. The problem with my stories that no one volinteeres to fix em for me, like, fix em form the start to begining! I asked a good writer once wiht my first story, all he told me is that the two words were miss spelled, do I need to know that? I mean, if you like the plot, why wount you halp me by fixing the whole damn story!?
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Awacar
7:42 am | July 10, 2004
And according to you, it is a crappy place. I do not agree, but it's funny to see a complaining, flaming, retarded jackass make an even more idiotic post.
Please, GO AWAY!
"Rooookie!!! Shut up, just shut up, you're driving me crazy."
"Get in there, you know, far away from us, and stay there."
And yes, I am serious.
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HoZ
5:45 pm | July 9, 2004
Oh shut the hell up Spanih Spartan, No one gives a Flying Fuck
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spanish spartan
3:07 pm | July 9, 2004
I AM RULER OF THIS SITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Dave Luck
7:46 pm | July 8, 2004
This story was brought to you by:
Christian Dior's Mosquito Repellant
- Because we do a better job repelling than attracting.
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Enough with the advertisements! *sigh*
Yes, the products advertisements are correct, however.
Major Grammar issues. Although the code is used, the story still needs to be proofread.
I suggest that you have at least three other people proofread your fiction (use the PREVIEW) button.
I will extend the greatest mercy I can in this dire situation. Quite droll, isn't it? In regards to the way people read in these troubled times, I wish to make a single remark:
- Like Cold Blooded, I will not flame - yet.
- Dave Luck
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HoZ
3:50 pm | July 8, 2004
i mean whithen certian boundries that is wat editors are for. if u can tell wat the word is no problem.no wat u worte there ja i can see that if someone wrote that they need help... also i will continue to stick up for people but i will cool it a good bit
Have A Day
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!@#$
1:51 am | July 8, 2004
Ares the Arsenal is the only thing I am pondering about... I never said Ares the Arsenal is spelled wrong I just said it was a funny name for a ship.
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Mainevent
8:40 pm | July 7, 2004
Hoz, you don't know shit about writing apparently.
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CoLd BlooDed
8:20 pm | July 7, 2004
I disagree, HoZ, although a good plot makes a good story, good writing makes an even better one. I mean, you can't read a story if its:
"wun dahy dur waz dis ting dat vemt BOON! ehnd haloo sploded cilling flug buht nuht da MC o noo"
This is an exaggeration, but the meaning is the same. We on HBO look for stories that are impressive in every way. Severian knows what he's talking about.
My policy, no flaming unless necessary.
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HoZ
7:51 pm | July 7, 2004
correction im not sorry sev just read the story for the story not the spelling
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HoZ
7:46 pm | July 7, 2004
i give up
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HoZ
7:44 pm | July 7, 2004
uhh crap Stupid double Sonofabitch
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HoZ
7:44 pm | July 7, 2004
uhh crap Stupid double Sonofabitch
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HoZ
7:42 pm | July 7, 2004
uhhh sorry sev just dont be so critical of everybudys writing k
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HoZ
7:39 pm | July 7, 2004
wat did i do im just sticking up for people who dont deserve the shit that people give them sorry
:(
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HoZ
7:39 pm | July 7, 2004
wat did i do im just sticking up for people who dont deserve the shit that people give them sorry
:(
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CoLd BlooDed
7:35 pm | July 7, 2004
HoZ, I'd appreciate it if you'd just stop spamming.
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Severian
7:21 pm | July 7, 2004
The reason I'm pissed is that your stories aren't improving. You have a good plot, but it's ruined by crappy grammar... Which is a pity. And a whole sack of shit, too, since I WANT TO enjoy it but I can't thanks to your lack of consideration in writing!
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HoZ
7:14 pm | July 7, 2004
uhh ignore my first email im kinda hopeless but mabye the next email
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HoZ
6:00 pm | July 7, 2004
haha sev a fucking ninny *tell ur friends*
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HoZ
5:58 pm | July 7, 2004
i havent got the balls to write my own story damn
lol
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HoZ
5:54 pm | July 7, 2004
damn i doubled agin lol
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HoZ
5:54 pm | July 7, 2004
heay cheak ur mail Elite Zov plz
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HoZ
5:54 pm | July 7, 2004
heay cheak ur mail Elite Zov plz
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HoZ
5:47 pm | July 7, 2004
any more stories in the future later OOPS TOO MANY SPACES lol
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HoZ
5:45 pm | July 7, 2004
iv read em all ive benn waiting for u to finish them i looged on every day to read them keep it up
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Elite Zov
5:08 pm | July 7, 2004
Well, if you are new, I see you are. Go and read all of my chapters. Hears a list you ned to know witch one goes first so you will not be so confuse.
1:The Failure
2:Through human eyes
3:I spy
4:Living Hell
5:Load up
6:Enemy or Ally
7:Belive or Reconsider (PART 1)
8:Belive or Reconsider (PART 2)
9:Belive or Reconsider (PART 3)
10:Prologue
And thanx again, mate! lol
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HoZ
5:02 pm | July 7, 2004
kay im done. lol i will aruge with u till the end of time... or until my cpu breaks
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Elite Zov
5:00 pm | July 7, 2004
U SON OF A BITCH !@#$ !!!
U ARE THE ONE HELL OF A BITCH!!
U ARE THE ONE WHO READ IT WRONG!!
MY NEVER MISSPELLED ARES THE ARSENAL, U READ IT FUCKING WRONG!! AND I CAN'T BELIVE A SAID SORRY FOR NOTHING!! GO TO HELL!!!!
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Elite Zov
5:00 pm | July 7, 2004
Goddamit, Hoz, I own you one. And the ship was called Ares the Arsenal. Sorry, I was in a hurry.
Hay Hoz, did you read ALL chapters? Hay, does anyone REALLY knew who the hell Admiral Ares were?
Hehe, I kinda finished the damn story Hoz, sorry, but ppl keep on pushing me in the ass, so, Yeah. I did had a plan on writing a few more chapters, but I finished it. Oh, well. No body still can take away your mind form you.
And Severian, why wound u and fuck your self some place else, evryone make mistakes, so are you once. So, zip it, or I'll cut you like a fish!..Not that I wounld able too, BUT THAT A DIFFERENT STORY!
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HoZ
5:00 pm | July 7, 2004
ohhh... MY BAD... I MISSPELLED STORIES OHH I AM A DUMB PERSON. :) lol
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HoZ
4:59 pm | July 7, 2004
keep up the good story writing Elite Zov...
im looking foward to some more good storys
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HoZ
4:57 pm | July 7, 2004
it is his story let him do want he wants. this isnt fucking school *grumbles*
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HoZ
4:53 pm | July 7, 2004
shut ur hole u royal fart muffin
i fart in ur general direction! no i dont wanna talk to u no more... or i must taunt u a second TIME! go find ur self a pig to fuck u bunghole...
up yours u fucking ninny
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!@#$
6:39 am | July 7, 2004
Ummm, a ship called Are the Arsenal? Sounds sort of weird.
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Severian
2:00 am | July 7, 2004
Punctuation, grammar, and correct spelling are a integral part of writing... You're free to form you own opinions, but post you're worthless shit somewhere else. If you won't fix these goddamn things after all this time, then stop. You're just cluttering up the story pages and taking valuable space from other, talented writers. And I hope that farting cow fucked you in the ass, idiot.
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HoZ
7:21 pm | July 6, 2004
sorry abot the double
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HoZ
7:17 pm | July 6, 2004
Oh have a fartin cow, it was a great story so wat if he messed up on spelling, i dont care. and he can use as many friggin spaces after a priod as he wants
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HoZ
7:17 pm | July 6, 2004
Oh have a fartin cow, it was a great story so wat if he messed up on spelling, i dont care. and he can use as many friggin spaces after a priod as he wants
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Elite Zov
1:28 am | July 6, 2004
oops, actually its three parts chapter.
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Elite Zov
1:28 am | July 6, 2004
It is strange because you never read the finall 2 part chapters of Belive and Reconsider. Common guys, read it all and you'll get it all. For cring out loud, such lazy boys out here!
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Mastergrunt
4:39 pm | July 5, 2004
This was kinda strange.
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Severian
4:26 pm | July 5, 2004
This is pretty much the same as it was in the forums... No coding (although that can be forgiven for now), pretty choppy grammar and the occasional misspelling coupled with a confusing "plot" just had the effect of having me quit reading it halfway through. Also, space twice after each period!
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