halo.bungie.org

They're Random, Baby!

Fan Fiction


Comments for 'Wings of Death Part 9: Friend or Foe?'



el_halo_diablo
11:22 am | October 12, 2002
well it's not like this is a grammar class, or maBYE it is! ;D
Spartan8934
1:46 am | October 12, 2002
Haha, very funny.
Spartan8934
9:00 pm | October 11, 2002
It's kinda stupid the way everyone spell everything wrong here, especially Diablo.
Spartan8934
10:06 pm | October 10, 2002
It's maYBE, not maBYE.
el_halo_diablo
2:45 am | October 10, 2002
hmmm Well expect to see her in later stories mabye. :D
Anonymous
12:00 am | October 10, 2002
Where'd the 400-pd Cortana go?!?!?!?!
Knightmare(MM
11:42 am | October 9, 2002
Dude... thats why you use an attachment for it.
Hoju
11:17 am | October 9, 2002
really good man, enjoyed it a lot. And you even have the dramatic cliffhanger in there :o
el_halo_diablo
2:49 am | October 9, 2002
attachment? Que?
el_halo_diablo
9:41 pm | October 8, 2002
I would definatly do format changes, but i don't think Hotmail is capable of that, not even italics! And that's frustrated me many times before. Anyone else want to criticize my work?
Knightmare(MM
7:24 pm | October 8, 2002
My suggestion to you is to screw with the format, stick up a few stars when you switch like that, if it's a few paragraphs, or just use Italics or something...
gruntkiller
5:11 pm | October 8, 2002
really good i can see this series climbing to the same level of cry for a hero
Wado
4:48 pm | October 8, 2002
I liked it. You sure tried a difficult thing when you flashed between Keys and the Spartans. At first I was confused, thought it was a different story, but I figured it out. Keep going.


bungie.org