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Comments for 'The Ride to Dagon IV' |
Duckfoot
3:56 pm | November 25, 2003
I am cool.
Semper fi my ass
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duckfoot
3:47 pm | November 11, 2003
damn. the indents worked on word! why not this!
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Wado
5:42 am | November 11, 2003
Nice job Duckfoot. I really like the way the story started. Keep up the great job.
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Duckfoot
11:37 am | November 7, 2003
Well! pseudocode is pretty easy (a bit/lot/the same as HTML)
Mainevent is very smart. Stairs are funny. People falling is funny. Hah. smart
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Mainevent
3:04 am | November 7, 2003
Mainevent laughs at people falling down stairs. Mainevent pushes people down stairs to laugh at them. Mainevent is smart.
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Dispraiser
11:17 pm | November 6, 2003
15 for me. A subpar student who gets 2.9s in school and laughs at people falling down stairs. Me!
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Walker
11:06 pm | November 6, 2003
Most of us are only fourteen.
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Alpha Lance
10:48 pm | November 6, 2003
Pseudocode:
Here's what's availble to you, formatting-wise:
Italics: To italicize a block of text, place a [i] before it and a [/i] after it.
Bold: To make text bold, place a [b] before it and a [/b] after it.
Paragraph Indent: To indent a paragraph, simply place a [indent] at the start of it. (Do NOT hit return after this code; if you do, the indent will be invisible on the line ABOVE the paragraph.)
Horizontal Rule: To place a horizontal rule in your story, simply place a [hr] on a line by itself in the location you'd like the rule to appear.
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Mainevent
9:42 pm | November 6, 2003
The pseudocode is as follows:
[hr]-inserts a line on the page, usually used for introducing time periods or breaking up character perspectives
(make sure to use the brackets)
[u]/[/u]-underline
[i]/[/i]-italics
[indent]-...duh
THat's all I think there is, if there are more someone will correct me, or you can just read the rules that Wu has in bold blue letters on the sumbition page.
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Duckfoot
4:00 pm | November 6, 2003
Okay, this is the first time that I have looked at the ratings...hmm...good...ish...
So... Points for next part
1. Make sure speaker paragraphs are correct (hey, I'm only 14)
2.I thought the halo fanfic section had the title of the series in the name of your story. Sorry. I was wrong. I will put the part in from now on.
4. What the bloomin 'eck (no swearing for me) is a pseudocode?
5. Hope you like the next part: A new objective.
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Mainevent
12:29 pm | November 6, 2003
There is "The Beginning" and then "The Ride to Dagon IV"
Dagon IV is the name of the planet, not the fourth story.
And you got great work here. You also got friends in high places. Great work and friends in high places is what the world's made of.
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Alpha Lance
3:31 am | November 6, 2003
What Walker said. But, I got a question. Where is part one, two, and three? And remember to use the pseudocode.
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Mainevent
2:42 am | November 5, 2003
Walker said it all.
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Walker
11:53 pm | November 4, 2003
Every story deserves a reader and I say you did a fine job, Duckfoot. A 9.2/10 job, in all honesty. Only one thing to say: you make a new paragraph every time there's a new speaker.
"Hello, Bob."
"Hello, Jane."
as opposed to
"Hello, Bob." "Hello Jane."
Um-kay?
Semper Fi
-Walker
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