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Comments for 'The Summit of Mout Denumbran Prt 2'



DeltaForce
8:57 pm | December 9, 2003
Why thank you, and consider the next one write, the osprey will be in there. And yes, it was my first story, so the was no real surprises, but thank you for the comment, well appreciated.
BrutalArt
1:32 pm | December 7, 2003
Good action story. The Kingfisher was a cool idea. How about a heron or osprey next?

I was thinking you should consider throwing in an odd kind of surprise with the attack for extra flavor. Anyways, hope to see more from you.


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