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Comments for 'Halo Training: CTF on Reach' |
Coolhand2
10:06 pm | May 6, 2004
MC:
I HAVE READ THE BOOKS! ALL OF THEM. Its just not my style to write like Eric Nylund! So, if you don't like it you can SHOVE OFF! In case you didn't notice the little ditty about the Gamma Dogs, then you have NO place OR grounds to base your opinions off of. I am not Eric Nylund. I am not William Dietz. This was the first Fan Fic I have EVER written. If you think that my story sucks because it dosen't sound like the author of the real books (who make a living at it, not me) then that is not an opinion that is just flat out bigotry. Also, what the heck are exchos?
Wiley:
Thanks I appreciate you liking my story. Like I said before I am not a professional writer so therefore I don't have perfect grammar, this was however run through a spell checker that aso check grammar. It sucks though so I only trust it on things that I have no idea about. If you could tell me about the errors so I can beware of them later on, I would be gratefull.
Hikaru:
It's not really a prequel story, but hey, what you think is what you think, and I ain't gonna change it. (So that's 2 votes for 1 against majority rules, and it seems that I am a generally good writer. Eh who knew! (not that I am braggin or anything...))
Thanks for your input, I wonderif there'll be more...
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Hikaru-119
12:00 am | April 23, 2004
I'm with Wiley on this one. Not all that bad for a prequel story.
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Wiley
10:50 pm | April 22, 2004
I have to respectfully dissagree Mc, as I thought this was pretty good... some choppyness and grammar errors.but other than that it was a pretty good story.
8.7/10
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MC's Cousin
1:03 pm | April 22, 2004
That was so bad I didn't bother finising it (er...well actually I was just too lazy)
From reading this it sounds like your basing it on a MP level off the game. If you're trying to make this a comedy, great, what you have done might work to your advantage; but if not:
Read Halo: First Strike-there is a whole chapter placed in the middle of the book somewhere about one of their training missions. Write your story like that and it will sound good. The way you had it written...well it sounds not good.
Also read Halo: The Fall of Reach-there are a couple chapters of what the Spartans go through for early training exercises. Perhaps you could base it on the referred to level in H:FS (I believe it was called Emerald Cove).
*too many exchos*
Signing Off
MCC
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