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Comments for 'The Valiant, Hopeless Fight of the Valiant and the Hopeless'



Chief-117
5:53 am | December 6, 2003
witelancer, if u r talkin about my poem, the flood is not involved at all. the poem is about the defense of earth during the covenant invasion. it tells of valiant but doomed defenders that continue to fight on because they believe someone will come to their need. and someone does come, Master Chief. the poem is about holding onto hope even if u cant see any. and the flood is not involved.
witelancer
2:46 am | December 6, 2003
well, the beginning was good, but your introduction of the flood/forerunner was way too abrupt/obvious... "omg the flood are here" is kind of lame. otherwise, it's ok, i guess
6.5/10
witelancer
2:46 am | December 6, 2003
sorry about that, that was the wrong story i clicked on!


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