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Comments for 'Pax the beginning part 3'



Dark Spartan
5:18 pm | July 24, 2003
Date- 2:27pm July 24 2003
Hey, where did you go Boa? The storie's great. But it's been about two months since the last chapter. Can't wait for the next part.
scope
12:21 am | June 1, 2003
lolipop dont post here if u will be like that. We are here for the insites and advice to rising story writers.(not bad for a 14 year old huh)
Andrew
6:21 pm | May 29, 2003
Whoa Shit! I'm late for another review dammit! Anyway nice story! Superb 10/10!
Boa
11:33 am | May 29, 2003
Thanks for the comments. I have been swamped in homework and other stuff for the past month so I barly had time to write this story. But in two weeks comes Summer!!!! So I will start writtng faster when Summer comes. Ace looking forward to the story. Scope about the grunt, may be. Andto Lolipop- What the hell?
Ace
2:45 am | May 29, 2003
*reads story* *dies* awesome story man, 10/10
im loving the renegade elite team up good job and keep it up...

oh and by the way, my newest chapter of Halo:War and Childhood will be coming out in the next release sorry about the hiatus
lolipop
10:44 pm | May 28, 2003
Lollipop lollipo lollipop
scope
1:35 pm | May 28, 2003
9.5/10 I love this story. I loved it more than the ones you already wrote.I almost love it more than my pet mouse. Maybe you can add a grunt as a allie to make it intresting...but thats just me.


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