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Comments for 'Inside the Blood Faction (TFW prologue)' |
Awacar
10:09 am | December 23, 2003
Sorry about not sending out fics lately, but I'll publish all the parts of Cpt.5 at the same time, and it's gonna be somtime between today and new years eve.
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Awacar
10:20 am | December 19, 2003
Thanks for the comments. I'll try to change it into:
"Bla bla bla" said Cordal, or something like that. I'll have to admit that I was a little lazy, but it feels as if the things I write after the lines gets so horribly un-variated.
But I'll try.
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Capo Rip
5:24 am | December 19, 2003
At least you began a new paragraph for each bit of dialogue.
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Mainevent
1:23 am | December 19, 2003
Well, it was alright.
What turned me off, and probabl others, was the formatting.
Cordal: Boh boh boh
Garough: Be ba bo
Juicey: Meek mack mope
Too much like a play to me.
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Awacar
5:55 pm | December 18, 2003
Does anyone have an oppinion about this story?! Posts, posts, posts, I want posts!
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Awacar
1:12 pm | December 18, 2003
Sorry, but it isn't a way to start the story, it was just an event before my TFW starts, and it belongs to TFW story. Maybe stupid to use the word "prologue", but I didn't find anything better.
Well, what do you think of it? Whos side are you on? Personally, I'm on Gauroughs side. Sure, he's an ashole, but he doesn't work for the Blood Faction.
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Sentinel
2:24 am | December 18, 2003
Strange way to begin TFW.
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