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Comments for 'Tactics: A New Way of Thinking (comedy)'



teemus
12:06 pm | December 14, 2003
I didnt understand a word, but i was still rolling on the floor laughing. I loved the Brute part.
Awacar
11:59 am | December 14, 2003
Thanks teemus, but you have to agree about that this story had a really bad grammar, and that it was choppy.
Awacar
1:59 pm | December 7, 2003
You've got bussy posting comments to my stories Sentinel, haven't you? Mail me sometime and I'll explain.
Sentinel
2:35 am | December 4, 2003
I couldn't stop laughing, yet I didn't get a single word.
Awacar
3:06 pm | November 27, 2003
Wee! Awesome comment, but please, send me some constructive critsism, concrete defaults and so on, that way you wont have to read a fucking ass-sucking story again.
Awesomedudeman
6:40 pm | November 26, 2003
THIS STORY FUCKING SUCKS ASS!!! NOT FUNNY, TERRIBLE GRAMMAR, EVERYTHING ABOUT IT SUCKS!!! NOT FUNNY!!!!!!
John Kitchen
6:45 pm | November 17, 2003
I'm glad you liked Merick's Journal's so much, you might want to check in on my new story: Episode 1: Old Landmarks. I really wish i took the time to read ur story, it sounded funny though...
Awacar
4:07 pm | November 17, 2003
"The marines approaches..." and "The humans throws/.../and skillfully fires..." How could I ever write these pieces of grammatical junk?


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