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Comments for 'Chapter two: Old friends saying goodbye' |
Awacar
5:41 pm | December 9, 2003
I'll look into the problem with some kinde of scope.
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Sentinel
2:48 am | December 9, 2003
It's weird isn't it?
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Awacar
1:57 pm | December 7, 2003
Sentinel, I start to wonder where scope is. For me he had... like disapeared.
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Sentinel
7:14 am | December 6, 2003
Listen to Awacar scope, besides, the story's beginning to get good.
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Awacar
3:00 pm | November 5, 2003
Okay, the part when MC says that he will have to kill humans isn't the best one in the chapter. But what would you do in his place?
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scope
12:00 pm | November 5, 2003
1/10 this story ucks. MC would never kill humans
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Awacar
2:20 pm | October 19, 2003
Sorry, i grammar checked it in word and doubble checked the story-form, but lets hope I'll do better next time.
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Awacar
2:18 pm | October 19, 2003
No excuse, but I am swedish. I grammar checked it in word and double-checked the real story-form but I apparently have to do better the next time.
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Hawk7886
7:05 am | October 19, 2003
This seems like it's been translated from another language. . .
I liked the story, it just wasn't excecuted correctly. Poor grammar.
7/10
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