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Comments for 'The final war: Chapter one: The forming of an alliance'



Awacar
1:56 pm | December 7, 2003
You're right, Sentinel, I'd never expect anyone to post this late! I think that it's a quite good way to explain things, but it's annoying to read the ****ing block of text!
Sentinel
7:11 am | December 6, 2003
Now I know that you'd never expect someone to post this late in the year. Forget that. It's a good beginning for explaining things though(and I don't need action to enjoy a story).
Awacar
5:47 am | October 18, 2003
Sorry, but the next chapter "Old friends saying goodbye" doesn't contain much raw action. Instead, there are some, in my oppinion, really cool dialogues. The action will have to wait to chapter three ("Getting real...").
Awacar
5:47 am | October 18, 2003
Sorry, but the next chapter "Old friends saying goodbye" doesn't contain much raw action. Instead, there are some, in my oppinion, really cool dialogues. The action will have to wait to chapter three ("Getting real...").
javier fernandez-vina
12:59 pm | October 16, 2003
Good ideas, well put together.Next time tough, try a bit more action instead of a grunt explaining stuff
Mainevent
8:24 pm | October 15, 2003
Tense changes

Watch those.
PaYnE
7:48 pm | October 15, 2003
great Story!


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