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Comments for 'The Darkness Worries - Unwanted Visitors [Part 03]' |
Steele
4:03 pm | June 5, 2003
Has anybody ever accidently hit post comment before they wrote anything in the box? If you haven't you should try it, its kinda comical.
Do you concur? Concur what? Do you concur? Yes...I guess I concur...
Yah, this story was pretty good, 8/10!
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Knightmare(MM
12:02 pm | June 5, 2003
I concur.
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Shadow
9:03 pm | June 4, 2003
No, I believe underway works perfectly well in that sentence
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Havok
7:44 pm | June 4, 2003
suspensful ending, but you mixed up a few descriptive words. you said, "the special extermination unit was underway" underway is when ships are moving. that was pretty much my only problem though. good work
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Argonox
7:12 pm | June 3, 2003
cheers
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scope
6:29 pm | June 3, 2003
9/10 Lol im the first to post. Any way i like it
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