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Comments for 'The Clergy'



Angelus
3:27 pm | June 20, 2003
Thanks a lot for your opinions guys, more to come!
Wiley K
1:42 am | June 16, 2003
A little confusing, but still gets a 9/10.
Red
1:41 am | June 16, 2003
Work on sentance structure. I am no master at naming gramatical functions, but from my limited knowledge you are missing way too many predicates. Still gets an 8.5/10 though...
Steele
9:45 pm | June 15, 2003
Talk about long sentences...
Hunter_Killer
8:58 pm | June 15, 2003
Hmmm... Very Interesting/Good/Confusing... 8.9/10


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