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Comments for 'Death From Above part II: Foreboding to Hell Fire'



James Kinsella
8:44 pm | April 14, 2003
I like it. I thought that it was a tad ominous though. Keep em coming.
Traumatised Marine
7:55 pm | April 12, 2003
Indeed it is!
AlphaBravo343
7:10 pm | April 12, 2003
The thing is, i wanted it to be dramatic and epic when the battle for earth does start, so a little buildup to the climax is always good.
Sarge
6:52 pm | April 12, 2003
Well not much happened action wise this chapter... I figured something like this would happen so it wasn't suspenseful or nothing well written though...
Shadow Spartan
5:27 pm | April 12, 2003
i agree steele....8.5
Steele
3:12 pm | April 12, 2003
8.5/10. Pretty good, keep it up.


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